Looking at this from the perspective of a future Mechanical Engineer... God's a much better inventor than I ever will be!
Does the poem make you appreciate how truly amazing animals can be?
How is the word choice?
Is the poem enjoyable to read, or just kind of "there"?
Most importantly, what are your general thoughts? I'd be pleased to hear them!
Edit: I fixed a mistake and changed one of the lines for clarity as advised below!